Leaving for work,I opened my door
Twenty-one things clouding my thoughts
Listless,my eyes land on you
Wide-eyed i stop,the clock didnt tick for me
In that halted moment I heard my heart pound as we gazed on..
My keys slipped and the world was noisy again!
I began to sense a change in the apparent unchangeables,
We kept meeting,growing fond of our company.
I realised you were seeping deep into my life without me noticing all this while!
And then i feared; the fear of loosing you!
As I knew you were not meant to be forever
But still i clung onto you as a foolish dreamer!
With it my days passed
Alas! You left and the painful tears gushed
It sunk my heart,I was living my fear!
I didn't notice even the remarkables around,
Dull it all seemed,devoid of feelings I was running from me!
Yet another morning,
Time to go to work, a withered me locking the door, the keys fell again,
And opened an old school of thoughts,
Which me myself was oblivious of, Lying somewhere within me.
I see it clear,
The layers of confusion and pangs disappeared somehow!
A beaming me, I walk alive now!
hey itz a gr8 creation!!!!!!!!!gd work sis..!keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteI could clearly see the feelings behind the creation of this poem so I wouldn't really use any adjectives to describe it.
ReplyDeleteI felt touched. :)
Write more hun! *hugs*
awesome compo
ReplyDelete@brother dearie, sammy , dipu .. thanks guys! :) @sammy..well i do get my chain of thoughts on d move at some odd hours but mostly cant reach the place of noting it down! (inefficient statement but thats true!)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully crafted your poem ..Liked it!
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